#WIP (Work in Progress)
Speculative Fiction Novel
Nina is currently working on her debut novel. The process will weave through many milestones such as a solid premise, outlining, character development, historical and subject research; all prior to even writing the first draft. While you might check out a stack of books from the library or binge read a new novel cover-to-cover, the actual process of envisioning, crafting, creating, and publishing a book takes time.
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June 3, 2020 - First things first
Planning and organizing has begun. I've had this idea for a novel for several years. It started with a long weekend visit to Springfield, IL. The theme of the weekend was President Lincoln as Springfield is home to his Presidential Museum and several other sites such as his law office, home, and his tomb. We stayed at a 1880s bed and breakfast. Although, not quite in the same time period as when Lincoln lived in Springfield, the bed and breakfast gave a historic element to the visit a chain hotel just would not have been able to offer. I recall the stairwell had an organ on the landing. The second I saw it, I thought, "I hope this place is haunted and that starts playing in the night!" It didn't, but the thought still makes me smile.
After this stay, maybe a month or so passed and I woke up from a dream. The dream placed me in a historic home, not the same 1880's bed and breakfast, but something similar. I was alone, physically at least, but I knew someone else was in the room with me, watching me. It was haunting, creepy, and I knew something no longer alive was there with me. I awoke thinking I had to capture the feeling--no plot or premise, mind you. I took that one dream with my visit to Springfield and filed them away in my head for later use.
More on how this idea forms later, but now back to the present. A few days back I picked up a black three-ring binder highlighted with gold foil. It is now my command center of my #WIP (that is: Work in Progress). Being a lover of organization, my debut novel must start with a solid foundation. This binder will serve as a place to store my premise, my outline, character development, project schedule, and more. Will this one binder be enough? I don't think so, but it is a start.
July 17, 2020 – Balancing life and writing
I was able to put my three-ring binder to use and developed a game plan to keep my #WIP on track. Writing full time is not an option for many and I am included. Stepping away and returning to my work is a way of life. Having a strong foundation and plan is extremely helpful.
Would I say progress has occurred? Yes, most definitely. Since my last check-in, I’ve move through several areas: premise, a high-level outline, main character vetting, and created two levels of synopsis. Previously, I have jumped in without a full grasp of my idea in a casual, organic fashion; this #WIP is too important to not explore the depth and breadth of the characters and plot ahead of time. That is not to say that my #WIP will be a carbon copy of my planning, but it provides a path for me to take and allows for adjustments along the way.
Currently, I am working through scene blocking. I know the steps my story will take, but I need to develop a tempo for the novel—how the characters move from event to event, the pace of the action, etc. A common mistake can be writing a path that is too easy for your protagonist. Make it too easy and the story is flat. Who would want to turn 500 pages of dull plot? Somewhere along the way, I heard that a writer should put their lead character in a mess, a big mess—bigger than they have ever experienced. Think about it. How many people gossip about others in an attempt to make themselves feel better? They focus on the misfortunes of others to elevate their own self esteem. So that is where I find myself on the map of creating my #WIP / debut novel. I’m making it messy.
Is it tempting to just dive in right now? Oh, yes. But I’m proceeding with caution to avoid stalling out down the road. But that is not to say it is all planning and no fun. An opportunity arose about a week ago to visit a cemetery and wander the rows for several minutes alone. I’ve always had in interest in quiet, peaceful cemeteries with unique headstones; the older, the better. Think of all the lives lived and all the stories told or silent. I consider this part of my research for my #WIP as the plot will take a turn towards the inevitable of life. As I move forward through my research, I plan on more site visits in addition to online research, historical webinars, and conversations.
Planning and organizing has begun. I've had this idea for a novel for several years. It started with a long weekend visit to Springfield, IL. The theme of the weekend was President Lincoln as Springfield is home to his Presidential Museum and several other sites such as his law office, home, and his tomb. We stayed at a 1880s bed and breakfast. Although, not quite in the same time period as when Lincoln lived in Springfield, the bed and breakfast gave a historic element to the visit a chain hotel just would not have been able to offer. I recall the stairwell had an organ on the landing. The second I saw it, I thought, "I hope this place is haunted and that starts playing in the night!" It didn't, but the thought still makes me smile.
After this stay, maybe a month or so passed and I woke up from a dream. The dream placed me in a historic home, not the same 1880's bed and breakfast, but something similar. I was alone, physically at least, but I knew someone else was in the room with me, watching me. It was haunting, creepy, and I knew something no longer alive was there with me. I awoke thinking I had to capture the feeling--no plot or premise, mind you. I took that one dream with my visit to Springfield and filed them away in my head for later use.
More on how this idea forms later, but now back to the present. A few days back I picked up a black three-ring binder highlighted with gold foil. It is now my command center of my #WIP (that is: Work in Progress). Being a lover of organization, my debut novel must start with a solid foundation. This binder will serve as a place to store my premise, my outline, character development, project schedule, and more. Will this one binder be enough? I don't think so, but it is a start.
July 17, 2020 – Balancing life and writing
I was able to put my three-ring binder to use and developed a game plan to keep my #WIP on track. Writing full time is not an option for many and I am included. Stepping away and returning to my work is a way of life. Having a strong foundation and plan is extremely helpful.
Would I say progress has occurred? Yes, most definitely. Since my last check-in, I’ve move through several areas: premise, a high-level outline, main character vetting, and created two levels of synopsis. Previously, I have jumped in without a full grasp of my idea in a casual, organic fashion; this #WIP is too important to not explore the depth and breadth of the characters and plot ahead of time. That is not to say that my #WIP will be a carbon copy of my planning, but it provides a path for me to take and allows for adjustments along the way.
Currently, I am working through scene blocking. I know the steps my story will take, but I need to develop a tempo for the novel—how the characters move from event to event, the pace of the action, etc. A common mistake can be writing a path that is too easy for your protagonist. Make it too easy and the story is flat. Who would want to turn 500 pages of dull plot? Somewhere along the way, I heard that a writer should put their lead character in a mess, a big mess—bigger than they have ever experienced. Think about it. How many people gossip about others in an attempt to make themselves feel better? They focus on the misfortunes of others to elevate their own self esteem. So that is where I find myself on the map of creating my #WIP / debut novel. I’m making it messy.
Is it tempting to just dive in right now? Oh, yes. But I’m proceeding with caution to avoid stalling out down the road. But that is not to say it is all planning and no fun. An opportunity arose about a week ago to visit a cemetery and wander the rows for several minutes alone. I’ve always had in interest in quiet, peaceful cemeteries with unique headstones; the older, the better. Think of all the lives lived and all the stories told or silent. I consider this part of my research for my #WIP as the plot will take a turn towards the inevitable of life. As I move forward through my research, I plan on more site visits in addition to online research, historical webinars, and conversations.
September 4, 2020 – The plotting thickens
The calendar has moved into September and my #WIP time has been filled with deeper plot development, getting to know my main characters, and much historical research. As noted, I am applying a #plotter method to my novel. This story is too complex to hit the road without a proper plan. Tentatively, my estimation puts me at 32 chapters in length; only time and editing will finalize this number.
I have looked more at how each of my main characters tick. Asking them questions not only regarding their physical attributes, but inquiring and collecting the details of their past—some humorous, some wretched, and some plain titillating. Will all of these make it in the book? No, heavens no. That would be TMI. However, just as a petticoat might make a brief appearance under volumes of fabric, so too may some of these backstories.
Research started a bit earlier in the writing process than I considered. It came in the form of several public library books on loan from various libraries as no one location could possibly have the details I require. As I read through these texts, plot points, as well as new questions came to mind. For instance, I noted that of the major cities within colonial times, night watchmen were a norm. But that begs the question, did New York specifically employ them during 1776? And if so, how did they behave? Would they call out the time of night or weather?
If you are interested in learning of the materials I have reviewed and continue to study, check out my Goodreads page and refer to my bookshelf on the left side - https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/20120417.Nina_Szudzik. I will be adding more to my list as I find them.
I have also taken time to view recorded and live webinars of historical places of interest to my work. These offer extra details that I might not be able to obtain from a book. Seeing as how 2020 turned into the year everything and nothing happened, this virtual form of research is valuable and appreciated.
Confession time. I wrote the opening scene. Yes, I said I would wait until more pre-writing was complete, but alas inspiration struck me just as I was falling asleep the night of August 1st. And as every good writer and author knows: you cannot be a fool. You have to write down those thoughts immediately! It’s simple. It’s to the point. And I bet you will want to read more. Details? Sorry, I am not ready to kiss and tell, however my opening does feature a celebrity of historical significance to America.
The calendar has moved into September and my #WIP time has been filled with deeper plot development, getting to know my main characters, and much historical research. As noted, I am applying a #plotter method to my novel. This story is too complex to hit the road without a proper plan. Tentatively, my estimation puts me at 32 chapters in length; only time and editing will finalize this number.
I have looked more at how each of my main characters tick. Asking them questions not only regarding their physical attributes, but inquiring and collecting the details of their past—some humorous, some wretched, and some plain titillating. Will all of these make it in the book? No, heavens no. That would be TMI. However, just as a petticoat might make a brief appearance under volumes of fabric, so too may some of these backstories.
Research started a bit earlier in the writing process than I considered. It came in the form of several public library books on loan from various libraries as no one location could possibly have the details I require. As I read through these texts, plot points, as well as new questions came to mind. For instance, I noted that of the major cities within colonial times, night watchmen were a norm. But that begs the question, did New York specifically employ them during 1776? And if so, how did they behave? Would they call out the time of night or weather?
If you are interested in learning of the materials I have reviewed and continue to study, check out my Goodreads page and refer to my bookshelf on the left side - https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/20120417.Nina_Szudzik. I will be adding more to my list as I find them.
I have also taken time to view recorded and live webinars of historical places of interest to my work. These offer extra details that I might not be able to obtain from a book. Seeing as how 2020 turned into the year everything and nothing happened, this virtual form of research is valuable and appreciated.
Confession time. I wrote the opening scene. Yes, I said I would wait until more pre-writing was complete, but alas inspiration struck me just as I was falling asleep the night of August 1st. And as every good writer and author knows: you cannot be a fool. You have to write down those thoughts immediately! It’s simple. It’s to the point. And I bet you will want to read more. Details? Sorry, I am not ready to kiss and tell, however my opening does feature a celebrity of historical significance to America.
October 16, 2020 – Writing and reorganizing
I am very excited to report that I am progressing through the first draft of my #WIP. After several months of research and plotting, I have carved out daily writing time and am currently wrapping up Chapter Four. Seeing the word count increase and moving through my scenes is satisfying in a year that has challenged the world.
As I work through my plan, I have rearranged and updated already as expected. Condensing occurred, as well as deletion of redundant scenes. More attention went to my characters and I felt the backstory of my novel’s “mentor” was interesting enough to earn her several subplot scenes to balance the story line thoroughly. Her start is sad, but I promise things improve.
I have been considering my steps following the first draft and was fortunate enough to receive the offer a beta read by a highly skilled individual I admire. My approach is not to rush through drafts and push out my novel prematurely as I enjoy crafting and tweaking the plot, wordsmithing and striving to present my best possible draft before considering even a beta read.
Already, my word count is high, though typical for my style. I prefer to overwrite and then trim, cut, and slash down the manuscript to a lean story. Recently, I read a suggestion that my first draft should be shorter than the second. Nice suggestion, however that will not be the case for me.
My work space is quite temporary at the moment and I’m thrilled to report painting, flooring and updates are occurring on my future office. It has been over 5 years since my writing held a dedicated place in my home and I miss the order and structure such brings.
I am very excited to report that I am progressing through the first draft of my #WIP. After several months of research and plotting, I have carved out daily writing time and am currently wrapping up Chapter Four. Seeing the word count increase and moving through my scenes is satisfying in a year that has challenged the world.
As I work through my plan, I have rearranged and updated already as expected. Condensing occurred, as well as deletion of redundant scenes. More attention went to my characters and I felt the backstory of my novel’s “mentor” was interesting enough to earn her several subplot scenes to balance the story line thoroughly. Her start is sad, but I promise things improve.
I have been considering my steps following the first draft and was fortunate enough to receive the offer a beta read by a highly skilled individual I admire. My approach is not to rush through drafts and push out my novel prematurely as I enjoy crafting and tweaking the plot, wordsmithing and striving to present my best possible draft before considering even a beta read.
Already, my word count is high, though typical for my style. I prefer to overwrite and then trim, cut, and slash down the manuscript to a lean story. Recently, I read a suggestion that my first draft should be shorter than the second. Nice suggestion, however that will not be the case for me.
My work space is quite temporary at the moment and I’m thrilled to report painting, flooring and updates are occurring on my future office. It has been over 5 years since my writing held a dedicated place in my home and I miss the order and structure such brings.
December 3, 2020 – A milestone is reached
Today, I succeeded in meeting a goal I have been fighting to reach for two months. The first draft of my manuscript hit 50,014 words by the time I closed my daily writing session. If I were creating a novella, the draft would be complete. However, this is far from a novella. Many characters are in the thick of things. I just reunited two close friends who have not spoken in over forty years; yet there is not full disclosure between them. There is an on-going test of wills between a betrayer and his prey. More than one score needs to be settled. There are questions of the status quo. And exile is a very real possibility.
Yes, I do realize that many authors were scrambling in November on a virtual challenge to produce a 50,000-word manuscript in one month. While many attempted and several wonderful books were born, alas the challenge was not a fit for my #WIP nor my writing style. I took twice as long to reach that word count and I do not care. My work is important and I need to allow my story line to develop and expand on its own time table. I wish every writer and author the best in their personal goals and believe events such as that challenge are important to motivate, increase awareness, and provide a bright spot in a difficult 2020.
Pitch events are also quite popular; one such coincided with my milestone today. Funny how that happens and your message is sent straight to the bottom of a growing pile of tweets. Such is the ebb and flow of creating. My head is down. My focus on my own #WIP, my characters, and their trials. Enjoying the space of my new office is icing on the cake.
Today, I succeeded in meeting a goal I have been fighting to reach for two months. The first draft of my manuscript hit 50,014 words by the time I closed my daily writing session. If I were creating a novella, the draft would be complete. However, this is far from a novella. Many characters are in the thick of things. I just reunited two close friends who have not spoken in over forty years; yet there is not full disclosure between them. There is an on-going test of wills between a betrayer and his prey. More than one score needs to be settled. There are questions of the status quo. And exile is a very real possibility.
Yes, I do realize that many authors were scrambling in November on a virtual challenge to produce a 50,000-word manuscript in one month. While many attempted and several wonderful books were born, alas the challenge was not a fit for my #WIP nor my writing style. I took twice as long to reach that word count and I do not care. My work is important and I need to allow my story line to develop and expand on its own time table. I wish every writer and author the best in their personal goals and believe events such as that challenge are important to motivate, increase awareness, and provide a bright spot in a difficult 2020.
Pitch events are also quite popular; one such coincided with my milestone today. Funny how that happens and your message is sent straight to the bottom of a growing pile of tweets. Such is the ebb and flow of creating. My head is down. My focus on my own #WIP, my characters, and their trials. Enjoying the space of my new office is icing on the cake.
January 2, 2021 – Nearing the end of the first tunnel
As the calendar turns to a new year, I see the light appearing in the distance. True to myself, I have been consistent with my writing taking time each day and not getting drawn into the noise of quantity over quality.
My #WIP covers much ground, taking different characters and story lines from the middle of the 1700s all the way up to the beginning of our current millennium. Ambitious? Quite, but I am enjoying the challenge. As my plot winds its way, I have gleaned a deeper insight into American history. The five months I spent in the Spring and Summer were enough to launch my first draft. As I near the epic “The End”, I have continued to research and expand my awareness of the American story. I have discovered many intriguing touch points including the 1911 Triangle Shirtwaist Factory fire in New York City. What is a shirtwaist? Really, just a blouse that was popular for a few decades. 146 souls lost their lives. Mostly women and young girls died in this blaze and the incident shined a light on immigration, as well as worker’s safety and rights. I recall skimming this event in history class growing up. Unfortunately, there is never enough time in the school year to dive into most topics.
Seems there are two types of people: ones who love the promise of a new year and those that believe adding a digit to the annual number does nothing. Myself, I always look forwarded to the promise of what is ahead. As an INFJ, I am very forward thinking. So much so that I enjoy planning and setting goals for not simply a day, week, or year, but for many decades to come. Yesterday, after a reflective meditation, I recorded my professional writing goals for 2021 in my new day planner. Some say that acknowledging your goals by putting pen to paper is a better way to succeed.
What’s the plan? Well, it begins simply enough. First up is completing the first draft of my book and I expect to do so by the close of January 2021. (see the image above for my current progress excluding today's session) Definitely needed is a self-edit. I have some notations of scenes to loop back to and I plan to print out the entire manuscript to dive in. I apologize in advance to Mother Earth and will attempt to compensate by continuing to employ several environmentally friendly practices. I did poll the #WritingCommunity on Twitter and found that those who voted preferred to hire a professional editor to review their draft when planning a traditional publishing route for their work. Prior to the poll, I already leaned that way. Funny how humans tend to ask questions when they already know the answers. 2021 will bring a proper edit to my work. In addition, I will be seeking a beta read or two; only after a very thorough edit as I do not wish to annoy anyone with a possible misplaced comma. Wait! There’s more to 2021. After completing the above, I do believe the time will come to shop around for an agent. The process is a two-way street and I will be seeking a relationship which works well for both sides; a partnership.
Something missing? You might be asking when I will seek a traditional publisher for my work. Not caring to rush, I refuse to state that 2021 shall be the year I begin that journey. Creating something from nothing and building a solid novel is my main objective. I will not offer a guarantee that I shall be ready to seek a publisher in 2021. However, I will continue to update this page and put one foot in front of the other. It is a new year and anything is possible.
As the calendar turns to a new year, I see the light appearing in the distance. True to myself, I have been consistent with my writing taking time each day and not getting drawn into the noise of quantity over quality.
My #WIP covers much ground, taking different characters and story lines from the middle of the 1700s all the way up to the beginning of our current millennium. Ambitious? Quite, but I am enjoying the challenge. As my plot winds its way, I have gleaned a deeper insight into American history. The five months I spent in the Spring and Summer were enough to launch my first draft. As I near the epic “The End”, I have continued to research and expand my awareness of the American story. I have discovered many intriguing touch points including the 1911 Triangle Shirtwaist Factory fire in New York City. What is a shirtwaist? Really, just a blouse that was popular for a few decades. 146 souls lost their lives. Mostly women and young girls died in this blaze and the incident shined a light on immigration, as well as worker’s safety and rights. I recall skimming this event in history class growing up. Unfortunately, there is never enough time in the school year to dive into most topics.
Seems there are two types of people: ones who love the promise of a new year and those that believe adding a digit to the annual number does nothing. Myself, I always look forwarded to the promise of what is ahead. As an INFJ, I am very forward thinking. So much so that I enjoy planning and setting goals for not simply a day, week, or year, but for many decades to come. Yesterday, after a reflective meditation, I recorded my professional writing goals for 2021 in my new day planner. Some say that acknowledging your goals by putting pen to paper is a better way to succeed.
What’s the plan? Well, it begins simply enough. First up is completing the first draft of my book and I expect to do so by the close of January 2021. (see the image above for my current progress excluding today's session) Definitely needed is a self-edit. I have some notations of scenes to loop back to and I plan to print out the entire manuscript to dive in. I apologize in advance to Mother Earth and will attempt to compensate by continuing to employ several environmentally friendly practices. I did poll the #WritingCommunity on Twitter and found that those who voted preferred to hire a professional editor to review their draft when planning a traditional publishing route for their work. Prior to the poll, I already leaned that way. Funny how humans tend to ask questions when they already know the answers. 2021 will bring a proper edit to my work. In addition, I will be seeking a beta read or two; only after a very thorough edit as I do not wish to annoy anyone with a possible misplaced comma. Wait! There’s more to 2021. After completing the above, I do believe the time will come to shop around for an agent. The process is a two-way street and I will be seeking a relationship which works well for both sides; a partnership.
Something missing? You might be asking when I will seek a traditional publisher for my work. Not caring to rush, I refuse to state that 2021 shall be the year I begin that journey. Creating something from nothing and building a solid novel is my main objective. I will not offer a guarantee that I shall be ready to seek a publisher in 2021. However, I will continue to update this page and put one foot in front of the other. It is a new year and anything is possible.
February 20, 2021 – 30-Days
30-Days. One month. That is the period of time I am requiring myself to not write, not review, not peek at my #WIP. An author not writing? Yes, believe it. How did this happen? Let’s take a step back in time.
On January 23, my very final sentence met the page of draft number one. The word count topped a dizzying height of 99,728. The final scenes came, but not without a balancing act of drama, facts, respect, and patience. What I thought might take five to eight days to write, took twice that amount of time.
Flash forward and today finds me in the home stretch of a self-imposed break from my work. A common tool for writers, a separation from the story allows your mind to reset, relax, and better yet, be able to focus when returning to study the manuscript. I have heard some writers give the separation only a few days, but others take a month or two. For myself, the decision to pause came easy. The time frame of pause, however remained a mystery to me until after I typed my final word - “today”.
What have I been up to during this hiatus? I’ve divided time between several tasks to strengthen my next chess move towards bringing my novel to the masses. I caught up on my reading list (see GoodReads). Aside from paging through books, I set to study a catalog of collected web links; some helpful and some offering dubious writing advice. And then there is my backlog of Writer’s Digest Magazines I set aside to focus on my #WIP.
My novel is a blend; an epic tale intertwining several sub genres: historical fiction, alternate history, fantasy fiction, romance, and a dash of paranormal. As such, when I discovered an online class pertaining to ghosts, I signed up for the 11-part self-study as a dose of side research. Three more lessons to finish.
Keeping in touch with the writing community is important and I have stay connected with emails, phone calls, and tweets to fellow authors and writers. I even had the honor of beta reading the next installment in a series I am following closely.
In my youth, I never fully appreciated interacting and supporting others in the pursuit of the written word. Youth makes you cocky and decades have a way of eroding those misguided notions. I want to be the best author I can be and want to see others achieve their goals as well. There is plenty of room for everyone at the table. We all have unique voices, interesting takes on situations, and our own callings.
What is next? As I glance over my shoulder, I spy two binders full of letter size multipurpose office paper. On Thursday, I wrapped up a complete printing of my draft. It is just short of 500 pages in length. It is a hefty beginning, but not the end of this journey. When the calendar flips to February 24, 2021, I have a note to commence the first read through of many in my future. Having kept myself in suspense for nearly a month, the thought is an exhilarating one.
Beta reads? Edits? Revisions? Yes, those are on the horizon. Every story has a beginning and I will reach those milestones at a later time. Writing a novel is quite a journey and I cannot wait to share my tale.
30-Days. One month. That is the period of time I am requiring myself to not write, not review, not peek at my #WIP. An author not writing? Yes, believe it. How did this happen? Let’s take a step back in time.
On January 23, my very final sentence met the page of draft number one. The word count topped a dizzying height of 99,728. The final scenes came, but not without a balancing act of drama, facts, respect, and patience. What I thought might take five to eight days to write, took twice that amount of time.
Flash forward and today finds me in the home stretch of a self-imposed break from my work. A common tool for writers, a separation from the story allows your mind to reset, relax, and better yet, be able to focus when returning to study the manuscript. I have heard some writers give the separation only a few days, but others take a month or two. For myself, the decision to pause came easy. The time frame of pause, however remained a mystery to me until after I typed my final word - “today”.
What have I been up to during this hiatus? I’ve divided time between several tasks to strengthen my next chess move towards bringing my novel to the masses. I caught up on my reading list (see GoodReads). Aside from paging through books, I set to study a catalog of collected web links; some helpful and some offering dubious writing advice. And then there is my backlog of Writer’s Digest Magazines I set aside to focus on my #WIP.
My novel is a blend; an epic tale intertwining several sub genres: historical fiction, alternate history, fantasy fiction, romance, and a dash of paranormal. As such, when I discovered an online class pertaining to ghosts, I signed up for the 11-part self-study as a dose of side research. Three more lessons to finish.
Keeping in touch with the writing community is important and I have stay connected with emails, phone calls, and tweets to fellow authors and writers. I even had the honor of beta reading the next installment in a series I am following closely.
In my youth, I never fully appreciated interacting and supporting others in the pursuit of the written word. Youth makes you cocky and decades have a way of eroding those misguided notions. I want to be the best author I can be and want to see others achieve their goals as well. There is plenty of room for everyone at the table. We all have unique voices, interesting takes on situations, and our own callings.
What is next? As I glance over my shoulder, I spy two binders full of letter size multipurpose office paper. On Thursday, I wrapped up a complete printing of my draft. It is just short of 500 pages in length. It is a hefty beginning, but not the end of this journey. When the calendar flips to February 24, 2021, I have a note to commence the first read through of many in my future. Having kept myself in suspense for nearly a month, the thought is an exhilarating one.
Beta reads? Edits? Revisions? Yes, those are on the horizon. Every story has a beginning and I will reach those milestones at a later time. Writing a novel is quite a journey and I cannot wait to share my tale.
April 14, 2021 – Another milestone reached
I have been looking forward to writing this entry for weeks. I held back as I wanted to completely finish my 1st draft edits. Yesterday, I accomplished that goal. It took 47 days total. That was after the 30-day “no touch” period following my 1st draft completion plus a 2-day read through. My process for the 1st round of edits was multi-faceted. Using a printed version of my manuscript, I would hand edit one chapter at a time. Then, I would transfer those changes to my electronic copy while updating further. Next, I ran a list of words I wanted to avoid overusing against my chapter and adjusted. This is to remove any vague or filler words and any passive voice. Lastly, I read my chapter aloud.
It wasn’t until Chapter 20 when I discovered a feature in my document to have an automated voice recite my text. From Chapter 20 to the end, Chapter 34, I used this feature and loved the results. When a person reads their own text, their mind often smooths over words and it is easy to miss mistakes. Granted, the automated voice sounds like it should be in a 1960s exhibit, but it is 1000% better than not having the feature. I will be doubling back and running this function against Chapters 1 – 19.
So many things are moving right now. My head is littered with next steps and planning. In March, I attended a one-day workshop on traditional verses self-publishing. The class was invaluable and is preparing me for my next phase. We discussed many topics, but genre was of particular interest to me. I have struggled to pin down my novel. It mixes genres. But the workshop emphasized the importance of focusing on one main genre for pitch and marketing purposes. This led me to some soul searching. When considered, my #WIP is no true genre with the exception of one. It is indeed speculative fiction. I balance the world we know with a new world. I toy a bit with history, only to compliment the plot.
The March event led me to sign up for a master class in June focused on creating query letters. When you are searching for an agent to represent you or a publisher to consider your manuscript, you generally send them a query. The workshop touched on the basics, but I am concerned with putting my best foot forward as I pitch my debut novel. The time between now and the master class, one of my objectives is to locate one to three comparable books to include in my query. The hunt is on and I have some good leads.
As I do not trust myself with only a self-edit prior to pitching, I will be hiring a professional editor to review my #WIP. I followed up on a few leads I collected and have narrowed it down to the service I want to use. Only my eyes have been on my text and therefore, I am electing to have a developmental edit to prepare and polish my manuscript. Tentatively, I’m looking at midsummer to begin that process. I’ll request beta reads once I am all polished up.
To add to the mix, I started to compile a list of agents to query once my #WIP is ready to go. This compilation will be an on-going side project, as well as a list of potential publishing houses.
Lastly, today I begin to create a checklist of my to-dos for my 2nd draft edits. I have notes scribbled on multiple pieces of paper. A checklist will wrangle these wayward thoughts and help me consider all the angles I intent to review before passing it over for the professional edit.
Things are moving forward. I am excited for the next chapter!
I have been looking forward to writing this entry for weeks. I held back as I wanted to completely finish my 1st draft edits. Yesterday, I accomplished that goal. It took 47 days total. That was after the 30-day “no touch” period following my 1st draft completion plus a 2-day read through. My process for the 1st round of edits was multi-faceted. Using a printed version of my manuscript, I would hand edit one chapter at a time. Then, I would transfer those changes to my electronic copy while updating further. Next, I ran a list of words I wanted to avoid overusing against my chapter and adjusted. This is to remove any vague or filler words and any passive voice. Lastly, I read my chapter aloud.
It wasn’t until Chapter 20 when I discovered a feature in my document to have an automated voice recite my text. From Chapter 20 to the end, Chapter 34, I used this feature and loved the results. When a person reads their own text, their mind often smooths over words and it is easy to miss mistakes. Granted, the automated voice sounds like it should be in a 1960s exhibit, but it is 1000% better than not having the feature. I will be doubling back and running this function against Chapters 1 – 19.
So many things are moving right now. My head is littered with next steps and planning. In March, I attended a one-day workshop on traditional verses self-publishing. The class was invaluable and is preparing me for my next phase. We discussed many topics, but genre was of particular interest to me. I have struggled to pin down my novel. It mixes genres. But the workshop emphasized the importance of focusing on one main genre for pitch and marketing purposes. This led me to some soul searching. When considered, my #WIP is no true genre with the exception of one. It is indeed speculative fiction. I balance the world we know with a new world. I toy a bit with history, only to compliment the plot.
The March event led me to sign up for a master class in June focused on creating query letters. When you are searching for an agent to represent you or a publisher to consider your manuscript, you generally send them a query. The workshop touched on the basics, but I am concerned with putting my best foot forward as I pitch my debut novel. The time between now and the master class, one of my objectives is to locate one to three comparable books to include in my query. The hunt is on and I have some good leads.
As I do not trust myself with only a self-edit prior to pitching, I will be hiring a professional editor to review my #WIP. I followed up on a few leads I collected and have narrowed it down to the service I want to use. Only my eyes have been on my text and therefore, I am electing to have a developmental edit to prepare and polish my manuscript. Tentatively, I’m looking at midsummer to begin that process. I’ll request beta reads once I am all polished up.
To add to the mix, I started to compile a list of agents to query once my #WIP is ready to go. This compilation will be an on-going side project, as well as a list of potential publishing houses.
Lastly, today I begin to create a checklist of my to-dos for my 2nd draft edits. I have notes scribbled on multiple pieces of paper. A checklist will wrangle these wayward thoughts and help me consider all the angles I intent to review before passing it over for the professional edit.
Things are moving forward. I am excited for the next chapter!
July 5, 2021 – Self-edits and a master class
As with my first round of self-edits, I wanted to get through another complete pass of my manuscript before posting an update. Second round edits went quicker in regards to content review due to the earlier clean up. Yet, when I doubled checked sources and usage, the process took a bit of elbow grease. Mid-June, I was able to reach the point at which I have applied as much self-reflection as I possess. I’ve been told, you’ll know you’re ready for an outside editor once you are out of ways to improve the work.
This milestone was also reached in time for a master class on writing a query letter. I’d been waiting for the workshop for months and it exceeded my expectations. As an added bonus, the instructor included materials on preparing a synopsis for potential agents and publishers. This led me to a five day redo of my synopsis.
As I decided to have a developmental edit of my manuscript prior to seeking an agent, the package includes review of the query and synopsis. I found this appealing as my #WIP is my first full novel manuscript and it possesses some unique challenges in regards to time frames and world building. My master class included a SME critique of the query and I am grateful for that insight. However, due to time constraints, the SME did not have access to review my synopsis nor manuscript. The developmental editor will have a holistic view of my novel and marketing tools (query/synopsis). I consider both critiques essential to preparing my work for agent and publisher reviews.
I am pleased to report that my #WIP is currently under first round reviews by my developmental editor. This phase of the process will take upwards of a month before I receive initial feedback. I’ll be working to correct and polish things back up for a second round of edits expected to take another month or so. With that schedule, it pushes me into September/October 2021.
Sounds like I’ll have time on my hands? Well, yes and no. While I await feedback from the editing process, I have two professional goals. The first is to continue prepping for submissions to potential agents by maintaining a database of leads. And the second would be what’s next.
Yes. You heard correctly. I am not yet through the stages of my current #WIP and I’m diving into what comes after. Through speaking with colleagues, I’m prepared that any agent or any publishing house could inquire what else I am working on and I plan to have an answer. And as a type-A, planster (author who tends to plan rather than wing it), I draw comfort in looking down the road in anticipation of the next #WIP.
Thank you to all those who have supported my efforts thus far. My dream of publishing this manuscript is inching closer to reality.
As with my first round of self-edits, I wanted to get through another complete pass of my manuscript before posting an update. Second round edits went quicker in regards to content review due to the earlier clean up. Yet, when I doubled checked sources and usage, the process took a bit of elbow grease. Mid-June, I was able to reach the point at which I have applied as much self-reflection as I possess. I’ve been told, you’ll know you’re ready for an outside editor once you are out of ways to improve the work.
This milestone was also reached in time for a master class on writing a query letter. I’d been waiting for the workshop for months and it exceeded my expectations. As an added bonus, the instructor included materials on preparing a synopsis for potential agents and publishers. This led me to a five day redo of my synopsis.
As I decided to have a developmental edit of my manuscript prior to seeking an agent, the package includes review of the query and synopsis. I found this appealing as my #WIP is my first full novel manuscript and it possesses some unique challenges in regards to time frames and world building. My master class included a SME critique of the query and I am grateful for that insight. However, due to time constraints, the SME did not have access to review my synopsis nor manuscript. The developmental editor will have a holistic view of my novel and marketing tools (query/synopsis). I consider both critiques essential to preparing my work for agent and publisher reviews.
I am pleased to report that my #WIP is currently under first round reviews by my developmental editor. This phase of the process will take upwards of a month before I receive initial feedback. I’ll be working to correct and polish things back up for a second round of edits expected to take another month or so. With that schedule, it pushes me into September/October 2021.
Sounds like I’ll have time on my hands? Well, yes and no. While I await feedback from the editing process, I have two professional goals. The first is to continue prepping for submissions to potential agents by maintaining a database of leads. And the second would be what’s next.
Yes. You heard correctly. I am not yet through the stages of my current #WIP and I’m diving into what comes after. Through speaking with colleagues, I’m prepared that any agent or any publishing house could inquire what else I am working on and I plan to have an answer. And as a type-A, planster (author who tends to plan rather than wing it), I draw comfort in looking down the road in anticipation of the next #WIP.
Thank you to all those who have supported my efforts thus far. My dream of publishing this manuscript is inching closer to reality.
August 29, 2021 – Developmental editing (DE)
As August draws to a close, I find myself knee-deep in revisions. My editor returned my manuscript with plenty of helpful notes and suggestions. It is never easy hearing someone critique your work; however it is simply part of the process. Overall, I was pleased with the feedback although I did not agree with everything. I reviewed all the notes and let it sit for a few days while I considered my revisions.
Did I then dive into them? Nope. I actually worked on a mapping exercise of all my scenes. I had previously mapped and outlined my manuscript, yet this new look was meant to examine it more closely. I needed to determine how to rework my opening. My original drafts broke the book into two parts. While engaging, the first part did not pace well with the second causing a disjointed arrangement. Honestly, I knew this criticism might arise. I tried to arrange things just right. Looks like I missed the mark.
And so today, I’m still in the process of reworking my opening. I’ve actually moved a stronger moment forward and am cutting some of the original part one altogether. There are portions of the former opening I need to keep and therefore, I am reworking these into the story line. Over the last several days, I’ve made progress. My opening is better for the DE.
There are other considerations as well. I have to strengthen a few characters. Build in some missing scenes. Work on better orienting the reader. All of these are in the works and will be for the foreseeable future.
After over one year of working on my #WIP, it can be disappointing to loop back. I’m attempting to focus on the future and the good work the collaboration of an editor and myself can have on my manuscript. I would so much rather have someone I pay tell me of an issue with my novel then a potential agent or publisher. This rework is the price of admission to the life of an author.
I am hopeful of finishing this round of revisions within a month or so. I’m also realistic my attention might be pulled elsewhere causing the goal to be missed. I’m putting one foot in front of the other until I reach the time to send this #WIP back for a second DE review. When you wait a lifetime to publish your debut novel, what is another few months of work to get it right?
October 31, 2021 – In the Eye of the Hurricane
Nearly three months and I am passed the first developmental edit and through my revisions. There is an eerie calm to my current state of mind. Looking in the rear view, I can honestly say the DE was quite worth the effort.
Taking revisions piece by piece, I considered and examined all suggestions. Some I executed immediately, while others took time for me to warm up to the possibilities. My feedback included encouragement that it was not simply directed at my #WIP, but rather with an eye on my future self. As an INFJ, I rather like this concept and recognize the value in considering my mistakes in this novel as red flags for my next endeavor.
Regarding the rework of my opening, the restructuring did in fact improve the flow. I saw my word count tank temporarily to the mid-70s. While unsettling, as I peppered selective scenes back in and grew my characters, the word count stabilized to a respectable 85,658.
As for characters, I did work to develop them more clearly. At first, I felt smite as I’ve read quite a few novels where I did not hear a clear character voice. Mauling it through, I came around to the idea and ended up loving the updates I made. This also allowed me to add in some scenes I’d tabled.
I did work on restructuring the novel to better orientate the reader. This change plagued me for a few weeks until I scanned my bookshelf and pulled a few beloved Fannie Flagg novels. They say good authors are prolific readers. I can see why. When one creates, you can live inside your own head too much. When you take time to appreciate the creativity of others, you open your own mind to new thoughts and pathways.
At present, my #WIP has been returned for its second round of DE review. Having been through the process once, it is much more exciting to understand my novel is in good hands and will return to me with new insight. Once it is returned (in approximately one month), I’ll cycle back through another list of considerations. I’m optimistic this second round of revisions will not take as long as the first. Then it is off for beta reads and a historical review, all before I begin to query agents. I hoped to be ready to query this year, but the calendar is taunting me. Better to do things right than in a rush. Thank you for the support.
January 31, 2022 – One step at a time
Fear not, I still plow forward with my mission to complete my #WIP. The 2nd developmental edit (DE) took twice the time I originally expected. Perhaps, it was wishful thinking to imagine a quick yet detailed edit. Honestly, I needed a thorough review of my progress and that is what I received. I cannot thank my developmental editors enough for their dedication and care with my #WIP.
As long as we are on the subject of honesty, let’s speak another truth. Even if I had received my DE notes earlier, my own personal schedule created little time to wade knee deep into them. The balance of life and work, day job versus true passion has always troubled me. However, this time I am prepared to soldier on and carve out time as I can. I’ve listened to my #WIP while ironing or cooking, studied my editing notes over a packed lunch, and I have planned my scene adjustments while drifting off to sleep. Even as I pen this update, I’m standing steps from my stove top cooking Sunday dinner.
Back to my #WIP. The notes I received ask me to dig even deeper at points and up my game to make this the novel it is destine to become. The feedback is appreciated. While I will not blindly change and tweak and adjust at the suggestion of others, I will take my time to consider each point and remind myself of my personal writing goals. What do I really want in the end? In my heart, I want to produce the best debut I can. I want to look back in twenty or thirty years and be proud of the manuscript. There is no doubt to me, this is my future.
Just today I completed a read through of the manuscript—all 430 pages. I reviewed all the inline notations and created initial comments to myself along the way. To be certain, there is work ahead. The manuscript might pass as complete to the eyes of some, but to me it needs more elbow grease. As it is my life purpose, I look forward to each moment of toil.
May 30, 2022 – Down a black hole & back again
Well, hello. It has been a while. My schedule still vexes me, as well as decisions on my 2nd DE. I have been able to take care of lower hanging fruit (I always love getting a little traction). My other DE revisions are far more complex and require thought.
I would love to say I am close to completion and ready for Beta readers and queries, but let’s not play games. Full disclosure, I am light years from that point. Just this morning, I had an opportunity to finish summarizing my novel by scene and POV. I have four main points of view and my 2nd DE suggested I cut one. As I am quite fond of the POV to possibly cut, this decision has vexed me. I’ve considered novels I’ve read, their number of viewpoints, and how the stories played out. My editor believes the cut would strengthen my main character considerably. Now that I have each and every scene in a handy notebook, I can take it along to my day job and thumb through it over lunch.
My life schedule continues to be my pain point. This balance between life, day job, and passion remains a bit of a mystery. Every time I breathe, another problem to solve or responsibility sneaks up to mug me—taking away my #WIP time. I’ve heard plenty of people schedule their #WIP time, but the arrangement isn’t panning out. A long, daily commute is one mugger. My catalog of scenes is my present solution to take back some time for my #WIP.
Another item on my list is to actually read a reference book I bought over twenty years back. It focuses on character studies and I hope to leverage the information with my DE notes to push this revision across the end zone. So far, it has provided some good points to examine within my text. 20/20: I probably should have read it sooner.
Do I regret taking this long? No. The conversation I had which prompted me to finally begin drafting my debut novel hinted the road would be a very long one and I would have to be patient. The lack of time does frustrate me; however I keep circling back to my accomplishments:
Have I told you, I love being an author?
January 2, 2023 – Still making progress at a turtle’s pace
I must review my day planner more often. Looks like I dropped off the face of the Earth, but alas I haven’t. Happy New Year’s to you and yours and to my #WIP. This is my favorite time of year. It always gives us promise in the new and fresh starts. Let’s get caught up on my progress.
My considerations of my #WIP 2nd developmental review took much time. I did make minor adjustments to my text here and there, however did not begin removing one of my POVs as suggested until September 2022. Some chapters were pulled and saved to a back-up file and some were rewritten under another POV. I figured I could at least consider the changes, but always retain the chapters and POV for future use. In the end, I took two months rewriting per the suggestion.
I find myself currently involved in a reading of the entire #WIP. I need to discover how the updates I made impact the storyline. While this is easiest done on my laptop, I also converted my #WIP to a pdf and am able to view it on my private Kindle as a document file. This is quite useful as often I only find small snippets of time to review my changes and this allows me a portable means to view it.
Just reviewing the #WIP isn’t enough. I also am noting changes and issues to be dealt with once I complete my reading. In actuality, I am considering a second read through prior to making any adjustments. Having the time between reading is beneficial as I am noticing small items which need attention.
I have come to terms with my slow pacing. Sure, some write one or two novels a year. Others take five or more to complete a manuscript. I shouldn’t have to say which category I fall into at this point. As mentioned before, balance in my life remains challenging. That is truth and that is acceptable by me. I will take small steps over a single shooting star #WIP. I am here for the long run and not to burn out in a hot flame.
Things are starting on a good note for 2023. I have made time this extended weekend to make progress on my #WIP. I will take success where I can. It’s post 2020, inflation is a crazy mistress—a win is a win. Take care!
June 19, 2023 – Did someone say ink?
Since my last check in, I’ve been steadily plotting forward. Lots of rereading on my part. I worked on my lowest hanging fruit first: simple updates to clunky scenes. I definitely find myself now in the jungle of deep revisions and adjustments.
I’ve tackled challenges such as timing. I found elements of my #WIP confusing to read (as did my DE). I tweaked some here and tossed some there to punch things up. Cannot have a slow moving iceberg for a novel, can we?
When I removed a character’s POV (killed me to do it, but it had to be done), I was concerned about losing valuable pieces of my #WIP. Like a good author, of course I saved each and every thing I pulled out. In fact, I just reviewed my deleted scenes today and they helped me add some important flavor back into my work.
While I’ve heard edits are truly where a novel is made, I never understood the concept so well as I do now. I’m picking apart and studying everything with a fine eye. Does this sentence repeat something already known? Should I move it two lines forward for effect? Is this page true to the voice of this character?
I’m on track. I’m moving forward. Not always at the pace I desire, yet forward motion is occurring. I keep a journal on my desk. I update it each time I touch my #WIP. It’s a great way to see my progress, see the time I’ve put in. I don’t just want to create a novel. I already have. I want to craft my #WIP into the very best debut I can. It’s all me. No artificial crap you hear of now days. I’m in the trenches, plotting my way through the mud knowing that this is really happening. I’m writing the best piece of my life and it is only the beginning.
As August draws to a close, I find myself knee-deep in revisions. My editor returned my manuscript with plenty of helpful notes and suggestions. It is never easy hearing someone critique your work; however it is simply part of the process. Overall, I was pleased with the feedback although I did not agree with everything. I reviewed all the notes and let it sit for a few days while I considered my revisions.
Did I then dive into them? Nope. I actually worked on a mapping exercise of all my scenes. I had previously mapped and outlined my manuscript, yet this new look was meant to examine it more closely. I needed to determine how to rework my opening. My original drafts broke the book into two parts. While engaging, the first part did not pace well with the second causing a disjointed arrangement. Honestly, I knew this criticism might arise. I tried to arrange things just right. Looks like I missed the mark.
And so today, I’m still in the process of reworking my opening. I’ve actually moved a stronger moment forward and am cutting some of the original part one altogether. There are portions of the former opening I need to keep and therefore, I am reworking these into the story line. Over the last several days, I’ve made progress. My opening is better for the DE.
There are other considerations as well. I have to strengthen a few characters. Build in some missing scenes. Work on better orienting the reader. All of these are in the works and will be for the foreseeable future.
After over one year of working on my #WIP, it can be disappointing to loop back. I’m attempting to focus on the future and the good work the collaboration of an editor and myself can have on my manuscript. I would so much rather have someone I pay tell me of an issue with my novel then a potential agent or publisher. This rework is the price of admission to the life of an author.
I am hopeful of finishing this round of revisions within a month or so. I’m also realistic my attention might be pulled elsewhere causing the goal to be missed. I’m putting one foot in front of the other until I reach the time to send this #WIP back for a second DE review. When you wait a lifetime to publish your debut novel, what is another few months of work to get it right?
October 31, 2021 – In the Eye of the Hurricane
Nearly three months and I am passed the first developmental edit and through my revisions. There is an eerie calm to my current state of mind. Looking in the rear view, I can honestly say the DE was quite worth the effort.
Taking revisions piece by piece, I considered and examined all suggestions. Some I executed immediately, while others took time for me to warm up to the possibilities. My feedback included encouragement that it was not simply directed at my #WIP, but rather with an eye on my future self. As an INFJ, I rather like this concept and recognize the value in considering my mistakes in this novel as red flags for my next endeavor.
Regarding the rework of my opening, the restructuring did in fact improve the flow. I saw my word count tank temporarily to the mid-70s. While unsettling, as I peppered selective scenes back in and grew my characters, the word count stabilized to a respectable 85,658.
As for characters, I did work to develop them more clearly. At first, I felt smite as I’ve read quite a few novels where I did not hear a clear character voice. Mauling it through, I came around to the idea and ended up loving the updates I made. This also allowed me to add in some scenes I’d tabled.
I did work on restructuring the novel to better orientate the reader. This change plagued me for a few weeks until I scanned my bookshelf and pulled a few beloved Fannie Flagg novels. They say good authors are prolific readers. I can see why. When one creates, you can live inside your own head too much. When you take time to appreciate the creativity of others, you open your own mind to new thoughts and pathways.
At present, my #WIP has been returned for its second round of DE review. Having been through the process once, it is much more exciting to understand my novel is in good hands and will return to me with new insight. Once it is returned (in approximately one month), I’ll cycle back through another list of considerations. I’m optimistic this second round of revisions will not take as long as the first. Then it is off for beta reads and a historical review, all before I begin to query agents. I hoped to be ready to query this year, but the calendar is taunting me. Better to do things right than in a rush. Thank you for the support.
January 31, 2022 – One step at a time
Fear not, I still plow forward with my mission to complete my #WIP. The 2nd developmental edit (DE) took twice the time I originally expected. Perhaps, it was wishful thinking to imagine a quick yet detailed edit. Honestly, I needed a thorough review of my progress and that is what I received. I cannot thank my developmental editors enough for their dedication and care with my #WIP.
As long as we are on the subject of honesty, let’s speak another truth. Even if I had received my DE notes earlier, my own personal schedule created little time to wade knee deep into them. The balance of life and work, day job versus true passion has always troubled me. However, this time I am prepared to soldier on and carve out time as I can. I’ve listened to my #WIP while ironing or cooking, studied my editing notes over a packed lunch, and I have planned my scene adjustments while drifting off to sleep. Even as I pen this update, I’m standing steps from my stove top cooking Sunday dinner.
Back to my #WIP. The notes I received ask me to dig even deeper at points and up my game to make this the novel it is destine to become. The feedback is appreciated. While I will not blindly change and tweak and adjust at the suggestion of others, I will take my time to consider each point and remind myself of my personal writing goals. What do I really want in the end? In my heart, I want to produce the best debut I can. I want to look back in twenty or thirty years and be proud of the manuscript. There is no doubt to me, this is my future.
Just today I completed a read through of the manuscript—all 430 pages. I reviewed all the inline notations and created initial comments to myself along the way. To be certain, there is work ahead. The manuscript might pass as complete to the eyes of some, but to me it needs more elbow grease. As it is my life purpose, I look forward to each moment of toil.
May 30, 2022 – Down a black hole & back again
Well, hello. It has been a while. My schedule still vexes me, as well as decisions on my 2nd DE. I have been able to take care of lower hanging fruit (I always love getting a little traction). My other DE revisions are far more complex and require thought.
I would love to say I am close to completion and ready for Beta readers and queries, but let’s not play games. Full disclosure, I am light years from that point. Just this morning, I had an opportunity to finish summarizing my novel by scene and POV. I have four main points of view and my 2nd DE suggested I cut one. As I am quite fond of the POV to possibly cut, this decision has vexed me. I’ve considered novels I’ve read, their number of viewpoints, and how the stories played out. My editor believes the cut would strengthen my main character considerably. Now that I have each and every scene in a handy notebook, I can take it along to my day job and thumb through it over lunch.
My life schedule continues to be my pain point. This balance between life, day job, and passion remains a bit of a mystery. Every time I breathe, another problem to solve or responsibility sneaks up to mug me—taking away my #WIP time. I’ve heard plenty of people schedule their #WIP time, but the arrangement isn’t panning out. A long, daily commute is one mugger. My catalog of scenes is my present solution to take back some time for my #WIP.
Another item on my list is to actually read a reference book I bought over twenty years back. It focuses on character studies and I hope to leverage the information with my DE notes to push this revision across the end zone. So far, it has provided some good points to examine within my text. 20/20: I probably should have read it sooner.
Do I regret taking this long? No. The conversation I had which prompted me to finally begin drafting my debut novel hinted the road would be a very long one and I would have to be patient. The lack of time does frustrate me; however I keep circling back to my accomplishments:
- I have a finished first draft of a novel I wanted to write for over a decade.
- I prepped the manuscript and got it through one round of developmental edits.
- I received it back from the first DE and got down to business with revisions.
- I returned my baby for round two of DE review.
- I have the second DE notes in my hand and am toiling away as best I can.
Have I told you, I love being an author?
January 2, 2023 – Still making progress at a turtle’s pace
I must review my day planner more often. Looks like I dropped off the face of the Earth, but alas I haven’t. Happy New Year’s to you and yours and to my #WIP. This is my favorite time of year. It always gives us promise in the new and fresh starts. Let’s get caught up on my progress.
My considerations of my #WIP 2nd developmental review took much time. I did make minor adjustments to my text here and there, however did not begin removing one of my POVs as suggested until September 2022. Some chapters were pulled and saved to a back-up file and some were rewritten under another POV. I figured I could at least consider the changes, but always retain the chapters and POV for future use. In the end, I took two months rewriting per the suggestion.
I find myself currently involved in a reading of the entire #WIP. I need to discover how the updates I made impact the storyline. While this is easiest done on my laptop, I also converted my #WIP to a pdf and am able to view it on my private Kindle as a document file. This is quite useful as often I only find small snippets of time to review my changes and this allows me a portable means to view it.
Just reviewing the #WIP isn’t enough. I also am noting changes and issues to be dealt with once I complete my reading. In actuality, I am considering a second read through prior to making any adjustments. Having the time between reading is beneficial as I am noticing small items which need attention.
I have come to terms with my slow pacing. Sure, some write one or two novels a year. Others take five or more to complete a manuscript. I shouldn’t have to say which category I fall into at this point. As mentioned before, balance in my life remains challenging. That is truth and that is acceptable by me. I will take small steps over a single shooting star #WIP. I am here for the long run and not to burn out in a hot flame.
Things are starting on a good note for 2023. I have made time this extended weekend to make progress on my #WIP. I will take success where I can. It’s post 2020, inflation is a crazy mistress—a win is a win. Take care!
June 19, 2023 – Did someone say ink?
Since my last check in, I’ve been steadily plotting forward. Lots of rereading on my part. I worked on my lowest hanging fruit first: simple updates to clunky scenes. I definitely find myself now in the jungle of deep revisions and adjustments.
I’ve tackled challenges such as timing. I found elements of my #WIP confusing to read (as did my DE). I tweaked some here and tossed some there to punch things up. Cannot have a slow moving iceberg for a novel, can we?
When I removed a character’s POV (killed me to do it, but it had to be done), I was concerned about losing valuable pieces of my #WIP. Like a good author, of course I saved each and every thing I pulled out. In fact, I just reviewed my deleted scenes today and they helped me add some important flavor back into my work.
While I’ve heard edits are truly where a novel is made, I never understood the concept so well as I do now. I’m picking apart and studying everything with a fine eye. Does this sentence repeat something already known? Should I move it two lines forward for effect? Is this page true to the voice of this character?
I’m on track. I’m moving forward. Not always at the pace I desire, yet forward motion is occurring. I keep a journal on my desk. I update it each time I touch my #WIP. It’s a great way to see my progress, see the time I’ve put in. I don’t just want to create a novel. I already have. I want to craft my #WIP into the very best debut I can. It’s all me. No artificial crap you hear of now days. I’m in the trenches, plotting my way through the mud knowing that this is really happening. I’m writing the best piece of my life and it is only the beginning.